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Drabble: Actions Speak Louder Than Words

Drabble: Actions Speak Louder Than Words
Fandom: The OC
Pairing: Ryan/Taylor
Rating: R
A/N This was written at the request of 60schic. Smut isn't my strong point which will soon become evident. LOL I couldn't sleep and this served as the perfect distraction. Hopefully this will make up for the most recent cliffhanger of DOOM! Maybe?





Ryan couldn’t tell her what she so desperately wanted to hear. He’d heard enough false promises to last a lifetime. Actions spoke louder than words, and what he couldn’t say, he hoped she felt.

He hoped she knew what he meant when he tangled his calloused fingers in her hair. He hoped she understood what he was trying to convey when his hand lazily trailed down her spine. He kissed the under curve of her breast, and she wiggled beneath him. Her fingers pressed against his biceps as she moaned helplessly into his mouth. He entered her slowly, and she arced off the bed. Her legs wrapped around his waist, her body snugly pressed against him as he slowly brought her to her climax. He made a point to go slow, to force her to focus each movement, every flick of his tongue, each sensation that was coercing through her slight frame. Her body twisted, her eyes disappearing behind lowered eyelids, and he soon found his release as she quivered around him.

She sagged against him, sweat glistening on her forehead, as she fought to control her breathing.

When she opened her eyes, Ryan couldn’t stop the smile from forming on his lips.

Yeah, she knew.

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( 17 comments — Leave a comment )
kazfloyd
Mar. 14th, 2008 10:43 am (UTC)
Nice job. Very Ryan to say with actions vs. words.
nightrider101
Mar. 14th, 2008 07:31 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
oc_gambit2
Mar. 14th, 2008 03:06 pm (UTC)
Did you say *not* your strong point? Methinks you underestimate yourself.... Wonderful image here: "each sensation that was coercing through her slight frame."

And this is lovely: "He’d heard enough false promises to last a lifetime. Actions spoke louder than words,"...."Ryan couldn’t stop the smile from forming on his lips. Yeah, she knew." Thanks! *hugs nightrider*

nightrider101
Mar. 14th, 2008 07:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I suppose I'm not used to writing smut in this genre. I appreciate all your kind words! *hugs back*
malinr
Mar. 14th, 2008 04:20 pm (UTC)
This was amazing. In a few sentences you made great love, because this was not porn but Ryan making love. Hugs
nightrider101
Mar. 14th, 2008 07:33 pm (UTC)
*nods* I was trying to convey more than just porn. I'm so glad that come through for you! :)
60schic
Mar. 14th, 2008 06:33 pm (UTC)
The Chic is a happy camper. You did as much in a few short paragraphs as can be done in much longer fic. Lovely imagery of the word-challenged Ryan doing what I like to see him do best.

Lovely smut, hon, and I thank you!
nightrider101
Mar. 14th, 2008 07:33 pm (UTC)
YAY! This is the point where I breathe a sigh of relief. I'm so glad you liked it! :)
60schic
Mar. 14th, 2008 08:04 pm (UTC)
Even the shortest snippets of Ryan 'gettin busy' brighten my day!
katwoman76
Mar. 14th, 2008 11:01 pm (UTC)
Mmmmmmm :)
nightrider101
Mar. 15th, 2008 02:27 am (UTC)
That sounds like a good response. ;)
jassylou
Mar. 14th, 2008 11:16 pm (UTC)
All is forgiven!!!
First smutt?! Incredible!!!! first smut.So glad you brought chics request to fruition,and also did it so well.


*sending chocolate* for nightrider.:D Mwah
Another Mwah for "The Chicster"
nightrider101
Mar. 15th, 2008 02:27 am (UTC)
YAY! I've been forgiven! LOL

Thank you so much for your kind words and the chocolate. :D
jazzyjackrabbit
Mar. 16th, 2008 03:47 pm (UTC)
What do you mean, not your strong point?
Wonderfully written!

Actions spoke louder than words, and what he couldn’t say, he hoped she felt.
I think that it's one mission accomplished.
nightrider101
Mar. 16th, 2008 06:37 pm (UTC)
Aww! Thank you so much. :) I appreciate the vote of confidence. ;)
mirella67
Mar. 21st, 2008 03:59 am (UTC)
That was too romantic to be categorized as smut!
nightrider101
Mar. 21st, 2008 08:33 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I appreciate that. :)
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