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FIC: Scorched Food (3/3)

FIC: Scorched Food
Author: NightRider
Rating: PG-13 for slashy implications
Fandom: Doctor Who/Torchwood
Beta: The forever amazing starxd_sparrow
Characters: The Tenth Doctor and the Torchwood Team
Summary: “I won,” the Doctor whispered. His head lifted, his face splitting onto a maniac grin. “The King of Mortashon challenged me - me - to a drinking contest! In front of the royal court, of course. Can you believe it?"
A/N: This is dedicated and written for the lovely sarkywoman. I hope she enjoys it. It's more crack than anything else.

We're going to assume that Jack and Ianto have an open relationship.

This will eventually be a series. I figure it will give me a happy place to come back to when I need something fun. Thanks to everyone that has followed this story! I hope the conclusion doesn't disappoint.


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ginger_rude
May. 27th, 2008 09:45 am (UTC)
aw, sweet!

>>Stepping forward, Jack plucked the file out of the Doctor’s hands. “Oi! I was reading that!”

“I suppose classified isn’t in your vocabulary.”

“Sure it is,” the Doctor replied, reaching for another file. “It means ‘read me now because imminent disaster is sure to follow.’”>>

this does seem very Ten...
nightrider101
May. 27th, 2008 11:19 am (UTC)
Thank you!
slyreflection
May. 28th, 2008 05:02 pm (UTC)
Yay for happy and hot endings. :D I can't quite decide if I liked the yelling-for-no-discernible-reason, or the hot making out, or the Fuck Torchwood part better. (As for the last one, if someone put all the fic versions into a single Jack, then he'd have managed to sleep with all of Torchwood. And half of the DW cast besides. XP The whole fic was great, it made me laugh so much. Thanks for writing! I loved this series. :)
nightrider101
May. 28th, 2008 05:39 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you got a chuckle out of this. :)
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nightrider101
Jun. 1st, 2008 12:26 pm (UTC)
Oh, YAY! That's very high praise. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed this story.

Eventually I'm going to develop it into a series. People got so much of a kick out of drunk!Doctor. :) I've got a few other story ideas that hopefully people will enjoy.

Thanks again!
hence_the_name
Jun. 1st, 2008 08:08 pm (UTC)
Eee! I can't believe I let it go this long before I read this. NSFW and everything. ;)

This made me lol a bunch of times. Here:

“Will you just sit down and shut up for once? Do us all a favor and put a cork in it!”

“You’d like that wouldn’t you, Captain!” Sarcasm dripped from his words.


::snerk::

And here:

“Oh, for the love of God, will you two just have sex already?” Owen yelled. “There’s enough sexual tension around here to kill a Weevil!”

And here, too:

“So if we start kissing, you’ll stop asking me all these inane questions?”

Jack coughed, the water he was swirling in his mouth went spewing across the office. Dragging his arm across his lips, he asked, “Is this a trick question?”


And I loved the out of body experience.

And the last lines! Not a kiss goodbye! ::melts:: Awww. I know you keep saying this is a bit of crack, but it's turned into something really sweet, too. :)

Lastly--dialogue really is one of your strong points, and every bit of it here feels completely natural and IC. The argument at the beginning, the Doctor's comments when Jack finds him going through the classified files...very nice. :)
nightrider101
Jun. 1st, 2008 08:44 pm (UTC)
*blinks*

I'm blushing like a dang school girl, and it's all your fault! :P

Thanks for pointing out the lines you liked. You know how much I enjoy that. ;)

Lastly--dialogue really is one of your strong points, and every bit of it here feels completely natural and IC.

That's high praise, indeed! I always struggle to keep them as IC as possible. :) I'm glad they worked for you!

I must admit that I loved the last line. It was one of those endings that slapped me between the eyes and demanded to be written. ;) If only all my endings came as easy at this!

Thanks again for the lovely review. You're absolutely too good to me!
hence_the_name
Jun. 2nd, 2008 09:20 am (UTC)
It was one of those endings that slapped me between the eyes and demanded to be written.

Don't you love it when that happens? ;)

Edited at 2008-06-02 01:21 pm (UTC)
inkonparchment
Jul. 19th, 2008 01:08 pm (UTC)
I love this! Thank you for writing this! I'm going go back and read the other parts..yaynes.
nightrider101
Jul. 19th, 2008 07:33 pm (UTC)
Thank you!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
trillianastra
Sep. 4th, 2008 11:37 am (UTC)
WOW

Yelling! and kisses! and Owen being so fantastically Owenish (why yes, that is a word actually, :D)!

Um. How soon, exactly, can we expect the sequel? *puppydog eyes*
nightrider101
Sep. 4th, 2008 12:45 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!

The sequel has actually been started and three chapters have been posted. It's called The Adventures of Parker and Cohen.

If you're an Owen fan, I think you'll like it.

Thanks again!
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