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FIC: The Adventures of Parker and Cohen 3/6

FIC: The Adventures of Parker and Cohen
Author: NightRider
Rating: G - This chapter
Fandom: Doctor Who/Torchwood
Beta: The forever amazing starxd_sparrow
Characters: The Tenth Doctor and the Torchwood Team
Summary: The Doctor's antics continue and with Owen as a guide, how will Jack ever cope?
A/N: This is the sequel to Scorched Food. The crack continues!
Dedication: For my gentle reader, petit_fox.

I promise I'm going somewhere with this - I think.

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trillianastra
Sep. 4th, 2008 02:07 pm (UTC)
Um. That noise you may have heard was me, falling off my chair laughing.

Gwen nearly choked on her drink, and Tosh murmured a distinct “Aww.”

Hee. Loved that line even more than the one before it.

He wasn’t sure if he should be flattered or start looking for a good place to stick a knife.

Awww, grumpy Jack! Someone needs a hug...

Gwen started coughing and Jack swore there was a ‘liar’ somewhere between her gasps for air.

Loved that bit.

“Just say no!” Jack yelled. “Whatever he told you, don’t do it!”

I am weirdly scared by that.

“I had Andy call one of constables that’s working tonight and ask them to call Jack,” Gwen stated. “It bought us a few more minutes at least.” She grinned when Ianto and Tosh burst into laughter. “What? You’re just upset that you didn’t think of it first.”

Gwen Cooper, all is forgiven. Really. Everything.

Um. Next chapter please? I need more!


nightrider101
Sep. 4th, 2008 09:15 pm (UTC)
LOL Thank you so much! Although don't fall off your chair. I'd rather you didn't hurt yourself. ;)

It's always extra special when someone takes the time to point out the lines that they really liked. :D

Hopefully I'll be in the mood to write some cracky humor soon. Thanks again!

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